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Commission for PinkSharpie by ~the-missing:iconthe-missing:





The raindrops fall outside the window,
Like the love seeping from my heart.
You walk down the hall to pick her up,
Yet it is I you should be getting.
One night you knock on my door,
I figure you were asking where she is.
When I open the door quietly,
You are standing with roses and candy.
These are not for her you say,
They are really for you.
Yet when I reach for you,
You fade away into her clutches.
I can see you love me,
Yet her barbs are deep in your heart.
©2006-2008 ~the-missing
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Submitted: Jul 20, 2006
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A poem for a friend on gaiaonline.com.

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=naptha:iconnaptha: Jul 20, 2006, 1:49:40 PM
Typo?: "These are not for here you say"

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~PinkSharpieLove:iconPinkSharpieLove: Jul 20, 2006, 1:58:24 PM
I looked over that typo, oh well.
It's still an awesome poem and I love it. ^__^
~the-missing:iconthe-missing: Jul 20, 2006, 2:02:25 PM
thanks... i fixed it

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~Colors2Grey531:iconColors2Grey531: Nov 28, 2006, 2:46:20 PM
So pretty... I love it.. almost as much as I love youuuuu lol :P